SandSib Doujinshi: teaser

My current project. This is one of the revised pages of my old/failed doujinshi. However I kinda like how the new version is turning out to be. It still needs a name....hmm

You could say this is a teaser/preview, though it is a actual page of the doujinshi. Still very sketchy but that's cause I'm probably gonna ink (not PS) it 'n stuff.

This story takes place after the kazekage abduction arc. However it's an alternative story. Gaara never died but after being in a critical condition, has fallen into a deep coma at the hospital.

Well, let me knwo what you think